tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5829848.post113993051947970074..comments2023-10-19T21:08:43.405+08:00Comments on castle in the clouds: Yesterday and Todayxxooshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09989368091383362749noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5829848.post-1140046049714895612006-02-16T07:27:00.000+08:002006-02-16T07:27:00.000+08:00I guess that after churning much of my brain cells...I guess that after churning much of my brain cells, i manage to get some 微不足道 comments.. haha coz my english is very bad. i judge this from teh pespective of literature.. hmm... i duno how much gd stuff i can give to u.. <BR/><BR/>but i guess form the 3 stories of yours, i realised they lack something.. teh characters lack names. its very important. beacsue it can help readers liek me.. with Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5829848.post-1139937633051488352006-02-15T01:20:00.000+08:002006-02-15T01:20:00.000+08:00Hey JoanieYou asked me to comment on whether your ...Hey Joanie<BR/><BR/>You asked me to comment on whether your post had literary value.<BR/><BR/>I find the use of the phrase "literary value" very troubling because it certainly isn't up to me to judge. It was once said that "there are as many texts in the class as there are readers". This means that every visitor to your blog will probably have a different take on your short story.<BR/><BR/>For meJasminehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10324417109750882169noreply@blogger.com